my Dame Valerie Adams sick sentences

these are the unattended sentences:
The shot put hit the ground. The crowd went wild. I couldn't believe I had finally done it.

my version:
The shot put landed on the cracked concrete . The competitive audience arose to there feet as they saw the score . I could not believe what the commentator had spoken from their chatty pie holes this was extraordinary

my picture web frame on Dame Valerie Adams

this is my picture web frame on Dame Valerie Adams hope you enjoy 

Dame Valerie Adams flipgrid

these are my flip grid questions for Dame Valerie Adams

1.  how happy were you when you came second in the Commonwealth
2. do you ever think about your Tongan mother
3. why dont you live in Rotorua anymore
4. did you ever consider competing in a different sport besides shot put
5. how much did the shot put weight
6. Were you  nervess
7. do you have any allergies
8. do you enjoy life    

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my character web on Dame Valerie Adams

This is my Dame Valerie Adams character web  I hope you like it. 

Dame Valerie Adams

Valerie Adams fact file

this is my  Valerie Adams fact file hope you enjoy 

Dame Valerie Adams life timeline

this is my  Dame Valerie Adams time line

Dame Valerie Adams genuin.ly

This is my  genuin.ly on Dame Valerie Adams it was a lot of fun  I like using  genuin.ly

genuin.ly

my Sir Edmund Hillary draw it create it

This is my Sir Edmund Hillary draw it create it I chose to draw it 

my Sir Edmund Percival Hillary book

This is how I made my Sir Edmund Percival Hillary bookp1` in the video below

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my Sir Edmund Hillary fact file

  this is my Sir Edmund Hillary fact file hope you enjoy🐻👍😀

Picture character web of Sir Edmund Percival Hillary

This is my picture character web of Sir Edmund Hillary in picture it was very fun to make 😁😀👍

My character web of Sir Edmund Hillary

This is my character web of Sir Edmund Hillary this was a lot of fun to make and  it made me think

my Sir Edmund Hillary sick sentences

Sick Sentences

These sentences are 'sick' and need your help to make them better.

How could you improve or make them better?

The man walked up the slope. He used poles. The sun was bright. The sky was blue. He looked forward to the view from the top.

my version:

the man trudged up the steep slope. He used sharp pointy poles. The sun was a shining  gem. The sky was a lovely bright  baby blue. he was determined to encounter the top of the tallest mountain in the world.    

Kathleen hall learning

This week we are going to learn about  Kathleen Hall 

who is Kathleen Hall ?

Kathleen Hall was a New Zealand nurse.

why is Kathleen Hall well known?

is an expert in stress, mindful living and mindfulness. She is founder and C.E.O. of the Stress Institute 

look on google maps to find out where Quyang is ?

in 1920s - 1930s what happend during this time in china?

was a new republic confronting great challenges—economic, political, and social. ... Famine

Am I sir Edmund Hillary now

these are my interview questions

1.  how did it feel to reach the top of mt Everest
2. how did tenzing feel 
3. would you do it again
4. do you like being considered  a hero
5. would you have liked it if your kids were there with you at the top
6. who was your favorite child 
7. do you still miss Louise Mary Rose or June muldrew
8. did you have any oxigen
   
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my story board

This is my story board that I created with story board that. it was fun 

The Film Festival

Today we went to the film festival at the civic on queen street. We watched a series of short films. It was a very large theater. Room 24 had lots of fun .

I liked this one because it was  the opposite to the truth because the snails were dancing quite fast and they are normally slow

I liked this one because it is very accurate and funny the sloth gets a ice cream and it melts before  it can get to his mouth.

This one was my favorite because it was hilarious  and it had a great beat.

those were my favorites