Day 1 : Fish island
Foolishly, the uninformed people carry their furniture into there new home . The fish begins to move and while the people are in the house it takes them to a empty beach. With overly thick fog the family slowly separates .
Full of confusion, the little boy and his teddy (the only survivors) came across a old rickety bridge not yet knowing that a grizzly bear was close behind the boy and his teddy were not going to cross the bridge but as soon as the big grizzly bear raises up on his 2 back legs and then roars at the boy and his teddy he runs on the bridge and snap snap AHHHHH!!! he lands in the middle of a Forrest only 1 tree in sight .
Slowly, the boy and his teddy walk around the only tree to find a mysterious portal the boy and his teddy step in ....
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