Happily, the girl reads and soon the library comes to life....this was no ordinary library. The comfortable blue chair complements the messy red library floor, yet the books on the ground find their way back to the full shelves . The stacks of books take flight with the thin pages of fine paper, soon the girl is surrounded by flying books . The girl reads a mixture of hard backs and soft backs . soon the girl is flying with the help of the books they take her to a cold place and place her on a raft .
Hi Hazel. Well done on your paragraph and using an -ly starter to begin your writing. It helps us to create a more descriptive paragraph. I really like the sentence 'the books take flight'. This is a great way to describe what is happening to the books. What is your last line going to be that hooks in the next picture?
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