My best genre of writing for capturing the sun

I have another piece of writing but this time its for capturing the sun it is............ADVENTURE! that it the genre im doing. 
Fearfully, she trudges on to save the world from an endless night. But first she must find the person who stole the sun out of the raging sky. The sky was a pool of black oil covering the clouds. The needed to be restored or the sky will be black like coal forever. Suddenly, she saw a man with sun in his grasp, she charged at him grabbing the chain with sun in it, then she swung the chain a few times and  hammer threw it into the sky! The world has been saved from an endless darkness...

here is the image I had to work off. what do you think the world would be like with no sun?