Hello fellow bloggers today I have some more sick sentences to look after. here it is:
Sick: The big giant opened his mouth and yelled. His head was a grey color. He was really big and angry.
Healthy: furiously, the immense goblin wailed and cried a dreadful chant, making the city folks ears bleed. The colossal giants head was mossy grey pigment in the cloudy sky. The growling giant was raging at the busy street noises.
Hello Hazel, my name is Norman and I'm from Room 23. I really like your blog post about sick VS Healthy sentences. Thank you for sharing your blog with us.
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