Sick VS Healthy sentences

Hello fellow bloggers today I have a sick sentense that has the symtoms of a common cold so we will be looking after it to make it healthy

Sick:the sky was cloudy. The ships went across the water.

Healthy: gracfully, the immense ships glided across the gleaming waters, leaving a dominant trail in the remains teritory. The  silky grey ominouse clouds danced in the daunting horrer chamber lit above.